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First off, you need a name. I'd pick something that does NOT sound Japanese, because most of the characters in FMA do not have Japanese names. Anything European-sounding is fine. Unless you want the character to be from Xing, in which case you'd use a Chinese-sounding name.  If your character is someone who was from Xerxes, their name can be a little more creative, but I'd avoid using normal names spelled strangely.  Ex: Stefany instead of Stephanie, Kristal instead of Crystal, etc.  I'd also avoid using a name another character in the series already has.  If you're having difficulty thinking of a name, look at some baby-naming websites.

Then you pick their age. Most people make their characters 15-16 so they're close in age to Ed and Al. Unless you want to pair the character up with someone like Roy or Scar or Kimbley... in which case you'd pick an age close to theirs. Roy is 28, Scar is likely older. (I'm not sure of his actual age.) So be sure to keep other characters' ages in mind. If the character is paired with Roy, don't make them a teenager. It's very unlikely that he'd go for that. Unless it's an unrequited love, as in she has a crush on him but he doesn't like her back. Then it's fine to make her younger. (Assuming the character is a girl.) Basically, try to keep them close in age with the characters you will have them spending most of their time with.  I doubt some 23 year old would be following a couple of teenagers around (Ed and Al).

Pick a place for them to be from. Risembool, Central, Ishval, Xing. Those are the most popular ones. But remember that there are tons of other places in FMA. You can google "Map of Amestris" and a picture will probably come up with everything mapped out.  It's interesting to have characters be from countries that aren't as talked about, like Aerugo, Drachma, and Creta.  If you pick a specific origin for them, make sure their personality reflects that.  For instance, if they're from Drachma, they're probably used to cold climate and possibly a little rough around the edges.  If they're from Resembool, they're probably used to a country lifestyle and have done a lot of manual labor in their lifetime.  If they're from Central, they probably have a strong opinion one way or the other about the military, and probably live a busy, urban life.  If you want, you can make up a town, or pick one from the series.  Just know that if you make up a town, you should pick a region of the country it's in and design what kind of place it is.  For example, you could make up a town named Grull between Rush Valley and Dublith.  Considering what both of those towns are like, it's probably a pretty busy place that sees a lot of traffic from tourists traveling back and forth between towns.  There is also probably a good amount of mechanics in that area, mainly automail mechanics, because it's so close to Rush Valley.  Perhaps it's a manufacturing town where all of the tools are made before they're shipped to Rush Valley.  What's the weather like most of the year?  What kind of people live in this town?  Are there factories and/or mines?  Is there smog, traffic, etc.?

Decide if he/she has any powers. If you make them a chimera, do NOT give them animal ears or a tail. Keep in mind the other chimeras in FMA do not have those features of their animals. The closest thing is that Law, the Ox chimera, can sprout horns. But Dorochet, the dog chimera, does not have dog ears and a tail. However, he does have fangs and claws like a dog, and the personality of a dog. Martel, the snake chimera, does not have a forked tongue. But she does have the speed, agility, and flexibility of a snake.  Unless you make a character that is more like Nina, who was fused with her dog Alexander.  In which case, your character would be mostly animal with a few human qualities, such as being able to speak.  They probably wouldn't have any physical traits resembling a human, in this case, and they would look pretty much like an animal(s).  That might be a bit more limiting, however, than doing it the other way around.

If they are an Alchemist, remember they do not need to be a member of the state. Also, if they are in the military, they do not need to be a State Alchemist. Most people make their OCs State Alchemists. If you do this, try to make their power original. But make sure you are able to explain it scientifically. For example, my OC is the Starlight Alchemist. This is because she makes star-like structures in the air by transmuting the trace amounts of Helium, Hydrogen, and Carbon that are in the air. (Note that you may do something similar to this because the air we breathe is not only Oxygen. There are trace amounts of other elements in it. Note also that you want some kind of unique Alchemic ability, but it HAS to be explainable. This is because Alchemy is a science, and everything can be broken down. It's all about elements.) This is really only necessary if your character is a State Alchemist, however.  If they are a soldier who practices alchemy, or just a regular alchemist, they don't necessarily need to have any specific power/type of alchemy they use.  It might help, however, with character development, so keep it in mind.

You also need to figure out a look for them. If they are in the military, they might wear the military uniform. But they don't have to, especially if they travel a lot. Also, if they do, note that you should think of a side outfit for them because they likely do not ALWAYS wear the uniform. As for their hair/eye color, you can pretty much give them any color. However, Ishvalans should have red eyes, homunculi should have purple eyes, Xingese people have dark brown/black eyes, and people from Xerxes should have gold eyes.

As far as clothes go, it is all very situational.  I'll give a few examples, so pay attention closely.

It depends on if you're designing a guy or girl.  For a guy, I'd keep it somewhat simple.  But remember not to make it too modern.  No graphic t-shirts and jeans.  It would have to be most likely a collared shirt or a turtleneck or a tank top and slacks.  You could give them a jacket and go into a little detail with that, as long as it suits the style of the series.  But don't try to give your OC a coat like Ed's.  If you give them a coat, try to make sure it doesn't resemble anyone else's so it's original.  Also do NOT under ANY circumstances use a jacket that looks like Ed's.  The black one with the metal clamp over the collar.  If anyone else wears it, it just looks like you stole it from him and it looks unoriginal.  Be CREATIVE and design your OWN clothes.  You can look up European/American clothing styles from the late 19th and early 20th centuries, if you need help.

If it's for a girl, I'd say skirts, shorts, or pants.  Either leather or khaki or a dark material most likely.  If it's a skirt, you could make it pleated considering Winry owns a pleated skirt.  But try not to make it look too much like a schoolgirl outfit since they don't have them in FMA.  For a shirt, I'd say most people use a tank top and them give them a jacket for versatility.  A crop jacket would be cute and it's not often used. (As in a jacket that only goes down to the waist, not the full length of a normal jacket.) But no sweatshirts, it's too modern.  Again, don't use too much detail on the actual clothes.  But you could use alchemic symbols if you wanted to add some kind of flair.  Denim wasn't as popular back then, so it's probably not a good idea.  Leather, cotton, suede, etc. are better.

If you want them to be an alchemist, but you need them to have transmutation circles available at all times, you could give them an accessory with the circles engraved/sewn into it like gloves or bracelets or a ring.  My character draws them on her hands with a marker, so that's always an option.  Or they could use chalk to draw them on the ground.  But a lot of people find that it's better for them to have the circles available at all times to have an advantage in battle.

As far as shoes go, most FMA characters wear boots or sandals.  Wingtips, loafers, mary-janes, etc. will also work.

If you're designing a girl, don't make her outfit too revealing.  She could show a little midriff or cleavage but if you give her a midriff shirt, keep her skirt/pants long.  Again, jackets are your friend.

Other accessories a lot of FMA characters utilize are belts, bags, necklaces... but don't use anything strange and modern like fishnet.  I've yet to see a single FMA character who wears fishnet.  Pantyhose could world, if they work in an office or something, but it isn't realistic for a soldier.

If your character is from Ishval or Xing, be sure to look at the style of the clothes the people from those places wear.  Xingese people typically wear more Asian-type clothes.  Ishvalans wear more tans and dark colors, but it's more tribal-looking.  Lots of shawls and sandals and they cover most of their bodies, probably to protect them from the heat since they live in the desert.

If your OC is in the military, they'll likely wear the uniform a lot of the time.  But they should have another outfit for their civilian life.  Also, under their uniform, since it's only a jacket and pants, they need a shirt.  Roy wears white collared shirts, Riza wears dark, form-fitting t-shirts.  I think turtlenecks fit well also and tank tops.

Note also that you may give them automail, but it's wise not to give them a fake right arm and left leg like Ed. Or the opposite, a fake left arm and right leg. You could give them one missing limb or more if you wish. But try not to make it similar to another character. You could even give them a fake eye, like Archer. You can also give them any kind of automail you like. It does not need to look like Ed's. Note Ed and Paninya have different kinds of automail. Also note that Paninya has weapons built into her automail, so you may do that as well if you wish.  Don't make your automail look too much like Ed's, because Winry prides herself on her automail being special and different.  Unless you have a good excuse for having Winry make your OC's automail, then it might look similar, but still not exactly the same.  Try to avoid unnecessary automail, like fingers, toes, ears, etc.  It just seems like a reach and it's strange.

Decide if they are human, chimera, or homunculous. If it's a homunculous, note their name should be one of the seven deadly sins, which means you'll have to plan their appearance after one of the existing homunculi dies. Also note that if they are a homunculous, they'll likely wear dark clothes and have pale skin with dark hair and purple eyes. Also they need an oroborus tattoo, but try to put it in a unique place on their body, like no other homunculous has. Not on the chest, like Lust. Not on the thigh, like Envy. Not on the tongue, like Gluttony. And etc.

One thing I must say is that you should NOT under ANY circumstances make them related to any existing characters. This is a very evident Mary Sue trait. Ed and Al do not have any missing siblings that they didn't know about, and Roy does not have a million sisters. They can be friends with whoever you wish them to be friends with, but you should not make them related.

As for their history, note that they do not have to have a horribly tragic past. It does help, however, to develop their character if you are using them in a fanfiction. But you don't have to do that. They can have a home and a family, they can have a pet. They can have friends. Or they can be an orphan who travels because they have no home to go back to. Just try not to make it TOO tragic, if you give them a sad past, because that is another evident Sue trait.

It is not likely that they have performed a human transmutation and lived, because that is nearly impossible to do. That's why Ed and Al are so unique. However, it is possible. So if you REALLY want to have your character have done that, you may. Note also that if they did perform a human transmutation, they have likely seen "The Truth" and have the ability to perform Alchemy without a transmutation circle. But note that if you do that, people may consider your character a Sue because they are more powerful than other characters. If you do this, make sure this character is not more powerful than Ed and Al or Roy because that is a DEFINITE Sue trait.

If your character does use transmutation circles, you may design a unique circle for them depending on their abilities. However that does take a lot of research. For example, Roy's circle has a salamander on it. This is because in Alchemy, the salamander is a symbol of fire. Obviously, Arakawa did her research when she made this anime. It's one of the reasons I admire her so much.  But anyway, you may construct a unique circle for them or you may use one you've seen in the show. Also, they should have some sort of accessory or easy access to their circle since they may not have time to draw one if they're in a battle. My OC draws them on her hands with a marker. Other characters have bracelets or rings with their circles etched into them. Roy has his gloves. My friend's OC uses a gun with explosive bullets and she carves the circles onto the bullets so she can use Alchemy to make the gunpowder in them explode.
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I recently finished watching Brotherhood, so I went in and added a few extra details that might help.
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I hope this is in the right category........... but yeah. >>;

Hope this helps some of you struggling with your FMA OCs. And just OCs in general.


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-Sam <33
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Luna2200 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the guide. I've been working on my alchemist. Something I should note is that you mentioned Alchemists, humonculi, and chimeras. However, you didn't mention Alkahestry (May Chang; Scar's brother, etc), or Soul binding (Alphonse; Barry the Chopper; Slicer Brothers, etc.) My OC is going to have learned the art of Alkahestry, but still be an alchemist (use Alchemy). I'm just noting there was 2 small details missing. Otherwise, this is a great synopsis of how to make an fma character :)
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Pomera-CP Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im starting to watch FMA, and already thinking of making a OC.
I am at Episode 21. Should I keep watching? If I finish, Should I watch Brotherhood?
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Malcolmstr Featured By Owner Edited Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
My OC is the leader of the Amestrian Military,s Spec Ops Unit. He has mastered the art of Morph Alchemy which brutally changes his own body so it is exactly like someone else,s usually leaving scars, bloody wounds and other injuries cause that only makes sense. His symbol is that human drawing with 4 arms and legs and he has circles drawn in black ink all over his body.
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hermyKO1 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
Could I please ask for some help from you for my FMA OCs? I fear they may be Mary-Sues and I want some help to try and fix them
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SpiderTrekfan616 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Unfortunately it sounds like my character (By your definition) may be a stu, here's the stuff that you won't like about him.
1. He's seen the truth (In my defense of this however he didn't willingly perform human transmutation, he was caught in the middle of it like Roy Mustang was)
2. Automail left limbs, The arm has a small butane canister connected to the thumb which houses a hidden cigarette lighter.
3. His alchemy is flame related (I'm still working out the details on how he managed to uncover the secrets of flame alchemy without the involvement of Roy and Riza)

Would you help me out with this since he's pretty much still a work in progress.
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starfirefan441 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Student Writer
I was thinking of making my OC have a lot of automail. She would have lost both her limbs, left arm, and right midsection in a border skirmish between Aerugo and Amestris. She is very smart with mechanics and is able to create automail for all of her missing parts. But is this too Mary Sue-ish?
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RavenAshford14 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hmm... I'll give you credit that it does sound a little bit Mary Sue, but that can easily be fixed. Just give her a few weaknesses and/or disabilities to make up for her own personal automail and I think that would help. :) (Smile) 
For example, she may be deathly afraid of falling victim to a sin, or she could have difficulty with one of my her limbs in finding the perfect automail parts to getting it to work correctly. Does she know Winry? You gotta ask yourself these questions, and who knows, you'll get rid of that Mary Sue Clap 
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starfirefan441 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Student Writer
Thank you! :iconloveloveplz:
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RavenAshford14 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem! ^-^ Glad to help!
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betheleaf Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Student Artist
I wasn't sure if anyone one would help me with this, but I can't decide if my character should have seen the Truth or not. And if she did, what did she give up?
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RavenAshford14 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What I did in my OC was have her give up her sight. So instead of a limb, she could've lost one of her senses? 
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betheleaf Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Student Artist
I was actually thinking she would lose her sight or hearing but then I thought her interactions with another character would be difficult. And do you know any good sites on where I can do alchemy research because all the sites I've looked at haven't been very informative... 
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RavenAshford14 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, I feel ya, it took me a looooong time of research to get my information. But no, I don't exactly remember the sites, I'm sorry. 
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betheleaf Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Student Artist
oh, that's ok. I have a free day tomorrow so I should be able to do lots of research. I also came up with the idea of nothing being wrong with her and she just has this illness so she likes to be alone, but I don't think that's good.
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RavenAshford14 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ahh, that could be plausible, actually! If you were going to have something wrong with her, I had an idea for one of my OC's to have lost right leg. 
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betheleaf Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Student Artist
But I don't want to steal your idea... Should I should look up alchemy? I did that before and got really confusing results.
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RavenAshford14 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, being that broad of a topic doesn't give much promising results. Most commonly I would use a limb, if not overdone, or resort to losing one of their senses. 
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royal-tarts Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, is this still a thing :D
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RavenAshford14 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I was thinking of making a character that saw the gate but still decided to use a circle optionally and I was wondering if that would be a mary sue, or make sense whatsoever :/
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SexyMadHouse Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
It wouldn't be a Mary-Sue if you explained well enough on how your character saw them. Or else make your character wear small items and each item has their circle on it. That's what im doing.
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RavenAshford14 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Another question...
Would flats work for a female OC in the FMA universe? 
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royal-tarts Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think so, mine does ~
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RavenAshford14 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Alright then, sounds good to me
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royal-tarts Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem ~ :D
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RavenAshford14 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That helped a bunch! ^-^
Thanks~
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royal-tarts Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome :D
Anything else you need help with ~
I'll be here!
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EpicPurple28 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!  I just wanted to make sure my plans were correct and legit!  And they were!  Arigato!
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wolfdancer91 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
Actually, Roy does have sisters of a sort.  Madame Christmas, his adopted mother and paternal aunt,kind of adopted the girls that work for her.  It's less sue than a biological sister ^^
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neokasey82 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014
Thank. You. I've been looking for this for longer than you even know, hahaha.
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Myrethy Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So far the only problem-if I'm to go by this guide-with my OC is the tragic past. She's been through a lot, but she shares her past with several other characters, notably the chimeras from Lab 5, since she was with their group when they escaped. She's a bear chimera and doesn't meet the Elrics in my head until they go the Briggs... so would that be a reasonable character detail?
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JeffKira Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
Alright, My OC's name is Alice Floret, she has very pale hazy blue eyes and jet black hair, she is from Drachma, she is one year older then Ed and she's blind. She also doesn't speak, unless it's necessary. She wasn't always blind. And for her back story-I wouldn't call it tragic, I would call it terrifying. Basically, she was kidnapped at birth by an alchemy obsessed scientist that carved complex transmutation in her eyes- but since he knew this was painful he cut of the nerves to her brain so she couldn't feel. Even though she was the only test subject that managed to stay alive for the seconded part of the test, she went blind when she was 7 (keeping in mind the surgery took place when she was 5) She hand tunnel vision for those years in between though. And the worst part is the seconded part, he place a Philosophers stone in her heart -my oc isn't entirely developed so i haven't decided how he obtained the stone- When she was 11 someone found out what he had done and took the scientist to court, but the military had called a call back on all of those news papers in hopes of keeping the Philosophers stone under wraps.  in that time they thought she was dead but she wasn't. She should have been though. But, the Philosophers stone in her heart kept her alive. She ran away to Drachma but she grew up in a basement hidden in the off skirts of central. She stayed they for 3 years until she heard the Scientist was released from prison upon new evidence. Know he would be searching for her, she wrote to Roy. She had read about him the in news paper and thought he was amazing and knew he could protect her from the Scientist. Eventually after telling him everything about her, she wen't to central to meet with him. There, Roy makes an unsettling deal, if he dies she has to bring him back to life with human transmutation. The only problem his Alice has no idea how to use the Philosophers stone but, she agrees. But, the the thing that makes her weaker then Ed is that she has a whole in her heart and can't run or do to much physical activity. Fighting is also dangerous for her because her body can't sense if she's about to die or not.  She meets with Ed and Al, and it's not long before they find out she has Transmutation circles in her eyes -but they have no idea about the Philosophers stone- and the sad thing is Ed promises once he finds the philosophers stone and bring Al and him back he's gonna bring her sight back. And of course, Alice and Edward both become Alchemist and Alice becomes the Blind Alchemist,(even though the fact that she manipulates the carbon molecules to suffocate the victim or pushes them away using the oxygen molecules)  and the Alchemist's of the peoples dog... :3 
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royal-tarts Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow !! I love your OC :D
If you ever would want too ~ We could RP (or not ^^; )
Just, I like how your OC Sounds ~
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wolfmantwist96 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
Yay! Now I can finally add finishing touches to my OC!
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Zanpakuto139 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Mine's name is Jet (german for uh, jet) Élijah (french for elijah) Straal (dutch for jet) , also known as The Black Scroll Alchemist. he has a backpack filled with scrolls that have transmutation circles on them. he is also known as The Atomic Alchemist because he is so adept in alchemy, he has the ability to transmute objects to the molecular level (however this often leaves him with some random and unstable leftover thrown together by everything that didn't fit into whatever he was transmuting it into
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Zanpakuto139 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
oh, and he's preformed human transmutation to turn a hundred dead crows into on giant crow. the toll was more crows
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LazyDragoGal13 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
My OC's name is Racheal Amethyst Crystal, she's crystal alchemist. She was born with a unusual bang, and Amethyst is her eye color. Her style is Goth, so, anything black or purple. She have black hair with a purple bang. She found a amethyst crystal on her 13th birthday, and the crystal helps her use alchemy without a circle. She was born in the north, and always gets into trouble. She wears the crystal she found, as a necklace. Racheal's mom died of a sickness without a cure and her dad died in a war when she was 3. Racheal found out that there were two teens traveling without parents so, she hang with them. She also draws and cook.
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Zanpakuto139 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Crystal alchemist is taken.
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LazyDragoGal13 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
Shadow alchemist?
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RavenAshford14 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I imagine that has been taken as well by many people :c
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LunaHarborsSecrets Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
also if they are a state alchemist or other military personell I would recomened making their last name that of a WWII aircraft. examples; The armstrongs-Armstrong Whitworth Scimitar (U.S.)
Roy Mustang-north american p-51 mustang (U.S.)
riza hawkeye- northrop grumman e-2 hawkeye(U.S.)-(this one is awesome)

some names are partially shared by many WWII aircrafts and some non-millitary characters are alkso named after WWII aircrafts.
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Envyloverbutyeah Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Student General Artist
This could help me make my Fullmetal alchemist fanfictions work out better. Hm... The possibilities are now endless! Thanks! I owe you one!
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Wysteria-Gardens Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
Thanks for the guide! It's terrific. However, I wanted to ask about my OC. First of all, I think you should know that my alchemist comes from the future, as she uses an alchemy that no one has come up with yet in the fma timeline, and I thought that having her be the only person who uses this alchemy be a little sue-ish. She's also used purely for role play with my friends, so although she has a backstory, she doesn't have a story story. My headcanon is that alchemists improve and change and branch out with different types of alchemy. My OC's alchemy is energy alchemy, as she transmutes her own energy into different forms of energy to battle with. However, because this is her own energy, the downside is that she loses energy quicker. Would this be possible? And would it be sueish?
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ImaginationCircut Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
All I have to say is thanks very much for writing this :) I've wanted to make my own Fullmetal Alchemist OC for a while, but I seem to have the habit of accidentally creating OCs who are somewhat Mary-sue and that's something I don't want, especially for Fullmetal Alchemist.

Now, I had one years back and I'm curious if what she was like (from what I remember as I don't use her at all anymore) is at all Mary Sue. From what I recall, she was a homunculus, but didn't know it. And she befriends Ed and Al (the reasoning has left me; I don't remember any more) but when they all find out she was a homunuclus, she freaks the hell out. That's all I really remember. But is it Mary-Sueish to have my OC not realize she's a homunuclus, or does that actually work as long as I have reasons for things behind her story?
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FullmetalHeartedGirl Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This helps a ton. I took multiple Sue tests online and my character (The Metallic Alchemist, by the way) was the ultimate sue...
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Nunafish Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is awesome and super helpful. My sisters will never be able to call my OCs Mary Sues ever again. :D
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timelordsapprentice Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist
I don't want to be a nag but can u check my oc?
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countevil123 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012   Digital Artist
hi im new to the series and im considering making an oc with his soul in armor, what would your opinion be on how not to make it sue-ish.

my idea is that they have to be death row criminals, and were experimented on.
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Hunter-Re Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That happened in the actual series...
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countevil123 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013   Digital Artist
im aware

that's why i thought it was a good i idea at the time

but eventually i gave up and and inspiration for a new character came to me
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